(My address)

November 15,2012

Moanalua High School

2825 Ala Ilima Street,

Honolulu, HI 96818

Dear Moanalua High School Administration,

I have been attending Moanalua high school for two years, and I am pleased with the campus being a nice environmental space, and with a nice facility to attend to.

However, I have experienced some problems in using the schools bathrooms. One thing that I have experienced was the odor that lingers through the bathrooms, M and G building bathrooms for example. The smell of the bathroom is not completely repulsive, but it is bad enough to make the bathroom experience uncomfortable. The bathroom experience that makes me want to not bother of entering is just how bad the odor affect you time in using the bathroom, and how you can used the bathroom in peace without smelling that bad odor. To my attention this has not only affects me but other people around the school campus. Therefore there is more than one problem in the bathrooms, another problem would be where there is no locks that can keep the doors shut, H building would be another example. I know that the bathrooms are cleaned twice a day but it’s not just about the toilets and urinals but they have to do something about the odor.

Things that we could do to make the bathroom and nicer and cleaner environment would be that we can some how take some money out of the school to put air fresheners in them so it can make the odor escape.

All though I don’t have enough evidence I cant explain a whole lot of things that are problems to the bathrooms, I just believe that one thing that we can do is try our best to stop the smell and the bathrooms a cleaner place.

I have no problems with the schools facilities but its just that the bathrooms are not a nice place to be at.