Wednesday, August 8, 2012
Blog Revision
on my blog i made changes to match how much i grown from sophomore so what i changed to my blog was change the back round to make it look like i am not a little kid by just putting name brand clothing brands and etc also i change my pictures and inserted poems to so that related to my title and also i changed my picture because i changed over the summer.
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I really like your background with the sky i think it really matches with your flower. what i really liked about your blog was the poem you put in even though it was probably copied off of google but it was a touchy poem
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ReplyDeleteI agree with Branden; the background is REALLY cool. I like the face:) I really like how you do say how you've grown by stating the change from clothing, to the surfing picutre. This picture can have a significant meaning to someone, depending on what they see, but clothing doesn't have any meaning to it. The poems were a nice touch to show how you have grown personally, and what you have learned.
Something you could have improved on is that you could have changed your title, and written about how you changed the archive if you did.